Comments Received on My Poetry

Good Morning Bonita…
I wrote this quick as a flash yesterday, just came out of this little brain of mine…
(Response to “This Heart”)

TAKE ME AWAY!
And when you speak
it is like the gods speaking
thunder rages across the skies
I want to hold you and kiss you…
but no mortal man can do this…

No man can take you
and love you like I need to
kiss you like I desire from within

Take me from this human form
and make me a god…
then we can make love
drink nectar and be happy
B…
Written 20/01/2013
Gavriel’s Muse: (Little Cowardly Lion) “I enjoyed this poem a lot. it takes two to dance tango :)”

scotthastiepoet: (You Were the One) “Hi, my first visit here and, so far, this is the piece I’m liking the best – light, yet meaningful…
“arrows on my walkway
have shown me to your door” is my favourite line – Terrific!”

You have some very interesting, funny, witty, and provocative poems! Way to go! Have you thought of self-publishing? I love the drawings! In my opinion, if you publish the poetry, include the drawings.

From gregocious@yahoo.com on My Dominion #
lips and tongue make sensual fun but a naked caress make a yummy mess -G

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From scotthastiepoet on You Were the One #
Hi, my first visit here and, so far, this is the piece I’m liking the best – light, yet meaningful… “arrows …

From Kumar Gautam on Why I Was Mad
“Beautifully written and expressed :)”

From Kumar Gautam on Who Knew
“Just beautiful…”

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